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Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sjducb on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:08AM (#34105363)
I think this ignores the reason jargon exists. -- To demonstrate that the speaker is part of the "in" crowd.

If you stop using jargon then people assume you don't know what you're talking about. This affect is real. Your precieved credibility goes way down when you stop speaking in jargon.

It's the reason that the speaker used all of the tech jargon (launching a website). If they didn't do that then we would think they didn't know about websites.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by gumby on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:41AM (#34105653)
> I think this ignores the reason jargon exists. -- To demonstrate that the speaker is part of the "in" crowd.

That's unnecessarily cynical. It certainly can give off that impression. But it is also a shortcut for people who work together in a specific domain to be more precise (or more general) than would be implied by non-jargon speech. So to me those things in the sky are just clouds, but to a meteorologist they might be stratocumulus or cirrus.

Another case, a similar one, is the stickiness of obsolete language in a certain domains. I've never used the word "cloture" in a sentence,* but to use it is faster for those who need it than to spell it out. In law, some obsolete words not only carry specific meaning but can call back to existing case law.

For HN, CPU is a good example, being an old word whose precise meaning is quite fluid (used to be literally the cabinet with merely the ALU and some registers; instruction decode was just how it was wired together) and so is jargon too.

* until writing that sentence of course.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by tuatoru on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:45AM (#34105708)
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by dtgriscom on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:52AM (#34105774)
He used it as an example.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by DonHopkins on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:08AM (#34105930)
CPU is short for Central Processing Unit, and is often used to contrast with GPU, which is short for Graphics Processing Unit, which is often used for ML, which is short for Machine Learning, even though ML isn't just Graphics, and TPU is short for Tensor Processing Unit, which is also used for Machine Learning.

Also, C-3PO is short for See-Threepio, and is used for interacting with organics, while R2D2 is short for Artoo-Detoo, which is used for interacting with digitals and arguing with C-3P0, while TWKE-4 is short for Twiki, which is used for saying BDBDBDBD, which is short for Bee Dee Bee Dee Bee Dee Bee Dee.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SeCb_abgig0

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by gumby on Friday December 23, 2022 @11:24AM (#34107495)
Precisely: this gets annoying really quickly. Hence jargon.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by TomSwirly on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:19AM (#34106040)
You are describing technical vocabulary, not jargon.

Jargon has a slightly pejorative sense, just like in the article.

The article does not say, "Do not use the correct words for your discipline." It says, "Do not use meaningless words or overdramatize."

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by DonHopkins on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:32AM (#34106187)
Jargon is an old file of hacker culture slang definitions from the MIT-AI Lab "HUMOR;" directory, including the word "hacker" itself, that that Eric S Raymond hijacked and redefined to spread his bat-shit crazy political ideology.

https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=20382529

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by wwalexander on Friday December 23, 2022 @03:24PM (#34110205)
The response to your comment seems to be negative, but I personally think it’s accurate and on-topic, including the note about ESR and his ideology.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by yencabulator on Friday December 23, 2022 @04:48PM (#34110979)
Jargon is a word derived from Old French, and has been used in its current meaning since at least 1849. ESR may have listed some examples of jargon, but he for damn sure didn't get to define it.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by JumpCrisscross on Friday December 23, 2022 @11:00AM (#34107195)
> Jargon has a slightly pejorative sense, just like in the article

Not necessarily. Jargon is not technical. But it is an emergent feature of language in semi-isolated groups. Things get nicknamed, inside jokes stick, and from the outside it looks performative while inside it’s quite natural. That it subsequently often takes on a performative element, in particular by new comers, is an in-group mechanism, but it’s not always useless as a signalling mechanism. There even seems to be an in-built sense of disgust with respect to overly performative jargon that keeps the system in check most of the time.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by marcosdumay on Friday December 23, 2022 @11:16AM (#34107415)
Jargon means exactly the same as "technical vocabulary", but without carrying the connotation that requires their area of interest to be "technical".
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by PragmaticPulp on Friday December 23, 2022 @01:49PM (#34109292)
I agree. The linked examples of jargon in the article feel more like precise wording chosen to reflect legal or contractual obligations. Not great for casual communication, but when you start talking about people's job duties and working hours then precision is important.

Always consider your audience. If you're writing casual communications for a mixed audience, ditch the jargon and use simple words.

If you're speaking to professional peers on business matters, use the precise language. Don't unnecessarily complicate sentences or use complex words when simple words are equally effective, though.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sph on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:32AM (#34105573)
> If you stop using jargon then people assume you don't know what you're talking about

I think it's starting to go the other direction. As a technical-minded person if I have a business meeting and the other person starts throwing those yuppie buzzwords in my face I'll just mentally put them in the "empty suit with an MBA" bin.

It might be my Southern European sensibilities, but I value straightforwardness very highly than time wasting nonsense to signal you're part of the in crowd. Unless the hacker ethos has died, and we're back to the 1980 where middle managers in business suits are the cool guys.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by masklinn on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:53AM (#34105788)
But jargon is not the opposite of straightforwardness, a lot of jargon exists for concise precision[0], and hacker spaces are extremely jargon-heavy.

Hell, your comment is full of jargon. "Yuppie", "buzzword", "suit" (and "empty suit"), ...

[0] though it's usually very contextual when that's the case, which is really frustrating when things are taken out of context and either become completely unintelligible, or easily misinterpreted (and sometimes wilfully misrepresented).

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sph on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:57AM (#34105827)
I used those words to be polite and not to call them pillocks. Empty suit isn't jargon, it's a commonly used idiom. Yuppie isn't jargon, I was thinking about the movie American Psycho. It's just a term to refer to your stereotypical middle managers high on their own farts.

Avoiding business jargon doesn't mean having to stick to the 1000 most used English words.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sbuk on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:41AM (#34106298)
> commonly used idiom

Which the article points out, though not plainly, should be avoided.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by nickelpro on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:32AM (#34106191)
There's not a straightforward consideration of what is jargon, what is slang, and what is argot. Some linguists use the terms synonymously and some have strict theories of categorization, but there's no universal consensus.

In any case, your language here would certainly run afoul of the "simple English" the OP is espousing, and the OP terms such things "jargon", so contextually, yes, it's jargon.

Although personally I agree, the OP is using a particularly sloppy definition of "jargon", which often has a stronger technical connotation than merely metaphorical or business newspeak language.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by chrisoverzero on Friday December 23, 2022 @10:04AM (#34106567)
> It's just a term to refer to your stereotypical middle managers high on their own farts.

It means “young urban professional.”

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by IIsi50MHz on Wednesday December 28, 2022 @08:46PM (#34168507)
I always heard "young upcoming professional ".
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by masklinn on Friday December 23, 2022 @11:04AM (#34107244)
> Empty suit isn't jargon, it's a commonly used idiom.

Sorry to burst your bubble but that’s jargon.

> Yuppie isn't jargon, I was thinking about the movie American Psycho.

It’s also jargon.

> It's just a term to refer to your stereotypical middle managers high on their own farts.

I know what those terms mean.

> business jargon

Oh wow look at those goalposts flying by, amazing.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by patrick451 on Friday December 23, 2022 @11:24AM (#34107505)
In what sense are these words jargon? According to both the dictionary and common usage, jargon is the vocabulary of a specific trade or profession. And yet, yuppie is a word understand and used by everyone from crab fisherman to welders to lawyers to software engineers.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by honkler on Friday December 23, 2022 @02:09PM (#34109502)
This was the first time I was reading the word yuppie. So certainly not a jargon to me.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by forgotusername6 on Friday December 23, 2022 @02:14PM (#34109561)
Yuppie although originally likely a demographic term now has a well understood meaning. It is no longer jargon.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sjducb on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:01AM (#34105865)
You're still status signalling, just in a different way.

When I wear a T-shirt from a Hackathon to a developer conference I'm signalling just as hard as the sales rep in the suit.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sph on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:06AM (#34105918)
Of course. I'm not so cool (or naive) to think I'm immune to peer pressure and tribalism.

It doesn't necessarily mean that I'll have to go the other way and adopt the mannerisms of the annoying tech guy.

https://youtu.be/02a723LsoFA

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by marcosdumay on Friday December 23, 2022 @11:34AM (#34107637)
Hum... You lost some changes.

> and we're back to the 1980 where middle managers in business suits are the cool guys.

Nope, we are at the 20's, when social-only corporate climbers know not to use suits on development-dominated cultures (not software development, but "creating new things from known principles" development). So suits are irrelevant nowadays and lost all signaling meaning.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by blaser-waffle on Friday December 23, 2022 @04:51PM (#34111000)
> Unless the hacker ethos has died, and we're back to the 1980 where middle managers in business suits are the cool guys.

Those hackers got cool and became the guys in the suits. Dollar Uber Alles

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by cafard on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:29AM (#34105539)
Twenty years ago or so I got a copy of Database Design for Mere Mortals to review for a users' group. The author spent several pages almost-but-not-quite defining Third Normal Form, without ever using the expression. I complained of this in the review.

That's why jargon exists. It is much better to use 3NF or BCNF or simply normalize or denormalize than to bury the point in many words. .

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sjducb on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:37AM (#34105617)
Why do people use phrases like "ring-fence", "circle-back", "let's take this offline" ?

Those do not increase precision and phrases like "let's take this offline" are even more confused. Are they talking about an annoying idea in a meeting or a broken web server?

I do agree that some technical jargon can help communication between experts. Understanding the jargon marks you out as an expert. That's the root of why so much status-signalling jargon exists.

If someone says let's circle back to topic X they probably know a lot about project management...

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by kristianc on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:42AM (#34105668)
Because they often are intended to obfuscate and save face — and that is the point — the ‘plain English’ alternative for “let’s take this offline” is “you’re dragging this discussion off topic” or “I want to avoid having a row with you about this in public.”
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by frankc on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:15AM (#34105998)
You are right but calling this 'obfuscate and save face' is a pretty uncharitable take. "let's take this offline" is just a polite jargon for 'this is off-topic or inappropriate for this venue'.

I generally find hacker news interpretation of business jargon as uncharitable and unnessarily hostile. Not sure why such an innoccous expression like 'circle-back' sends people into fits of rage. There is good reason to be circumspect about heavy project-management overhead as its often misapllied, but that really has nothing to do with this jargon.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by kristianc on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:26AM (#34106122)
I didn’t actually intend it to be uncharitable - sometimes allowing a stakeholder (even a ‘key’ stakeholder) an off ramp to a potentially awkward situation is a much better outcome for the long term health of the project where it’s a reasonable assumption you’re going to have to work with this person again, for a period of possibly months or years.

HN probably has a higher proportion of people who prefer a slightly more direct style of communication, and enjoy working with code which is much more functional IO than working with humans. If those people are coming to HN to blow off steam, that’s what you should expect - doesn’t mean it wouldn’t be disastrous if anyone tried to implement it in the real world.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by WesolyKubeczek on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:47AM (#34106375)
> Not sure why such an innoccous expression like 'circle-back' sends people into fits of rage.

Because it’s not innocuous, it’s fucking obnoxious, that’s what.

Just as I was thanking my deities of choice a few years ago that “touch basing” all the time had become uncool and all but disappeared from the workplace parlance, now all of a sudden everyone is happily “circling back” to topics of choice. It seems to be coming and going in waves.

This new hotness of a slang is also particularly shitty because it alludes to going through a few rounds of unnecessary talk before getting to the point.

It’s also one thing if one person is doing this, but if everyone and their dog keep circling back to stuff, it sounds quite idiotic.

The only thing that’s even worse is when a manager adopts military terminology while knowing nothing whatsoever about military.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by quanticle on Friday December 23, 2022 @01:48PM (#34109274)
Because it doesn't clarify nor is it more concise than the alternatives.

A good example of this is "learnings". I have seen multiple managers use the word "learnings", usually in in phrases like, "What were our learnings from this?" Or, "What learnings can we take away?" But there's already a perfectly fine word to use: lessons! The only reason to use "learnings" instead of "lessons" is to show that you're a serious manager. It's just empty signalling.

Similarly, "ring fence". Is it really that much better than, "set aside"? Does it add any nuance, or is it just meaningless change for change's sake?

I am far more tolerant of jargon in law and technology than I am of it in business, because, in my experience, legal and technology jargon does function as shorthand, putting complex topics into a labeled box that allows the speaker to quickly make their point without having to repeat a bunch of knowledge that the audience can be assumed to be familiar with. Business jargon, on the other hand, is far more often merely different for the sake of being different.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by kristianc on Friday December 23, 2022 @02:00PM (#34109412)
> The only reason to use "learnings" instead of "lessons" is to show that you're a serious manager. It's just empty signalling.

I can’t really comment on Signalling, but the word learnings isn’t a new and modern invention. It’s in Shakespeare!

It’s also a fallacy to think that there’s a canon of ‘acceptable’ words we can choose from, nor that we are only allowed one word per concept. Language evolves over time and acquires meaning through use.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by quanticle on Friday December 23, 2022 @02:16PM (#34109579)
I can guarantee that none of the managers I've interacted with who used "learnings" were making a reference to the Bard of Avon.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by kristianc on Friday December 23, 2022 @02:34PM (#34109754)
I’m sure they weren’t either, but that is kind of my point — English is one of the most flexible languages in the world and no-one except linguists really looks too hard into the etymology of the words they use, but use the words that fit the occasion and adapt accordingly. And sometimes this works rather well — much as you may despise the word learnings, we got the word scrumptious through the same process.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by wink on Friday December 23, 2022 @06:06PM (#34111645)
Non-native speaker here and I've always taken "learnings" as just a notch more formal and business speak than lessons, but I've mostly filed it under personal preference for the native speakers who used it. Not completely synonymous but mostly.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by Spooky23 on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:29AM (#34106152)
It’s professional management jargon. If you’re communicating with managers or McKinsey people, it gets added to your vernacular.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by ohbtvz on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:17AM (#34105432)
This is not the reason jargon exists. What made you say that?

> It's the reason that the speaker used all of the tech jargon (launching a website). If they didn't do that then we would think they didn't know about websites.

To "launch" something is jargon?

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sjducb on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:33AM (#34105580)
What is the real reason that jargon exists?

Ostensibly it's to increase precision and allow experts to communicate quickly with each other. However that explaination can't explain phrases like "Ring-fence", "Let's take this offline", "360 degree feedback". All of those phrases have better simple English translations.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by ohbtvz on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:41AM (#34105655)
Your examples are not jargon, they're metaphors.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by incone123 on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:58AM (#34105835)
Some government websites are intended for a specialist audience. I think it's great that the site for paying my car tax is very simple but I would not expect the instructions for using a government data API to be written in the same way.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by ohbtvz on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:48AM (#34106384)
I don't think anyone is saying otherwise. It's clear that the discussion is about general public-facing government websites. Something for which the intended audience is a large portion of the population.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sjducb on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:09AM (#34105937)
Your not recognising jargon from other fields. All of those phrases have precise technical definitions.

For example "360 degree feedback" is when a manager's direct report is asked to give feedback about their manager. In other words you give feedback about your boss, often to your boss.

It doesn't really make sense as a phrase or metaphor. It should really be 180 degree feedback because if you turn 360 degrees you're facing the same way that you started.... But that makes it even better jargon. It signals that you've been on some management training courses.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by yulker on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:52AM (#34106432)
360 usually involves feedback from peers as well, hence 360.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sjducb on Friday December 23, 2022 @10:29AM (#34106818)
Makes sense, also I'm now sure that you'd be a good manager because you've demonstrated a deep understanding of the jargon.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by krona on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:27AM (#34105527)
> This is not the reason jargon exists. What made you say that?

Steven Pinker in The Language Instinct.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by ohbtvz on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:44AM (#34105697)
I don't have the book at hand. Do you have a more precise quote?
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by denton-scratch on Friday December 23, 2022 @10:00AM (#34106514)
> To "launch" something is jargon?

Not if it's a boat or a plane. Otherwise, probably yes.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by dan-robertson on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:20AM (#34105465)
The gov.uk team want to make a site for everyone in the country to use. Making it for some smaller “in” group would not help achieve that goal.

I don’t know what other word to use for launching a website but maybe there’s a better one.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by mildmotive on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:24AM (#34105499)
”deploying” is the closest I can come up with right now, but it’s not quite the same.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sjducb on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:52AM (#34105780)
Launching a website has a precise technical definition. That's why it's GREAT jargon. It means "deploy to production" or "make it available to the users". Using it correctly is a strong honest signal that you know about web development.

For the general public, you could use: Make website, build website, develop website, update website, create a new page. To an expert those feel wrong because they all mean slightly different things, the jargon is being used incorrectly.

That's exactly how government people feel when you mis-use: "ring fenced budget", "allocate money to", "assign money to", "raise money for". Those all mean slightly different things and using them wrong feels wrong and marks you out as someone who doesn't know what they're talking about.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by coding123 on Friday December 23, 2022 @01:31PM (#34109112)
i like your take here. I have this problem with people. If someone says: Can you create a website that describes this process? My first question is what domain name? Then they say, what do you mean we already have our website on ...com? Then I say: You said create a website - that indicates you want an entire website, it sounds like you just wanted a new page on the existing website.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by wink on Friday December 23, 2022 @06:09PM (#34111673)
Oh yes, so much this. The nice thing is that it's not unique to tech, I notice to many terms which are colloquially used only slightly wrong than by professionals when talking about my wife's work (in that case it's usually about legal/medical stuff).
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sakisv on Friday December 23, 2022 @12:06PM (#34108119)
Maybe "createad a website", "built a website" are simpler and deliver the meaning.

My thinking is that if by "launched" we mean "deployed to production" then it's useless for the end user. If it's not deployed to production, then the user has nothing to visit so for all intents and purposes of the end user you haven't built anything (or launched).

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by deltarholamda on Friday December 23, 2022 @03:02PM (#34109988)
>I don’t know what other word to use for launching a website but maybe there’s a better one.

The "portal" term is deeply overused, because it means so many different things to so many different people. Sometimes it means a special site for a particular topic; sometimes it means a landing page.

That's the problem with jargon. A lot of people hear a term, think they understand it, and then use it. They often have the wrong end of the stick, but they will not let go of their understanding of the word.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by fredgrott on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:25AM (#34105507)
I seem to remember the Richard Feynman story of how he hard to re-learn how to pronounce both math and science jargon.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by chiefalchemist on Friday December 23, 2022 @08:45AM (#34105707)
Correct.

Jargon === Signaling

Signaling === Status

Status === Power

Like it or not, it's what humans are wired to do.

That said, the wise do both. For example, use the acronym, but the spell it out as well. Well, you think about those who leverage signaling the most effectively, they tend to be more inclusive in their arc.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sjducb on Friday December 23, 2022 @10:31AM (#34106834)
I'm not sure why you're getting downvoted. That's the logical next step from my OP.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by chiefalchemist on Friday December 23, 2022 @11:33AM (#34107629)
You know what they say: If you're not pissing someone off, you're doing it all wrong.

Don't worry about it. I've learned a long time ago that HN's "virtues" are madly overstated. It's sad - and pathetic - that someone is making their own day issuing down votes for such things. And to not counter? That's just lazy.

I can't live a healthy and fulfilling life based on the mood of the pathetic and lazy.

Yeah. I know. I know. This WILL be down voted. I'm in tears.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by bhouston on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:11AM (#34105957)
> To demonstrate that the speaker is part of the "in" crowd.

I think the point of removing jargon is to remove the "in" and "out" crowds as much as possible, at least for the mundane aspects of government.

I think that some people will still try to make an "in" crowd in which they are a member by introducing jargon, but separating people into these groups doesn't benefit most, so let's try to fight that.

Simple words is better as it is inclusive and also makes things understandable.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by Spooky23 on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:27AM (#34106129)
Jargon adds context in a community.

“Tubular” was a term of art for surfers before the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles showed up.

It’s a normal and natural thing to develop. But it’s also normal and good to have communications professionals mandate editorial standards so that people can understand outside of the niche.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by leokennis on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:28AM (#34106141)
I hate how often I need to use words like “stack”, “anti pattern” and “key value store” so people believe I know my stuff. I feel like a tech bro.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by yulker on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:47AM (#34106376)
What other terminology might better describe those concepts? These seem to be technical terms that describe specific things. Unless using them in an unrelated context (e.g. describing your pantry as a key value store), these seem relevant.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by leokennis on Friday December 23, 2022 @11:14AM (#34107382)
* stack → (depending on context): server, operating system etc.

* anti pattern → bad design

* key value store → (almost always) database

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by marcosdumay on Friday December 23, 2022 @11:38AM (#34107702)
> stack → (depending on context): server, operating system etc

On that context, "stack" means exactly the set of all those things and a few more. You can't replace it by any one of those things. The alternative is enumerating all of them (that's what people used to do), what is bad (that's why people coined the "stack" term).

> anti pattern → bad design

Hum... Now are you talking about software architecture, UI, UX, communications design? Your replacement is confusing.

> key value store → (almost always) database

It is an specific kind of database, with performance characteristics that are completely different from the relational databases that the "database" word alone implies.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by zeroxfe on Friday December 23, 2022 @11:52AM (#34107942)
This is kinda making a pretty good case for the jargon. :-)
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by wink on Friday December 23, 2022 @06:10PM (#34111695)
I'm still looking for a good alternative term than "use case" without resorting to a whole sentence trying to ask what the person needs solving or how the thing is going to be used. Doubly so in German.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by dragonsky on Friday December 23, 2022 @06:22PM (#34111827)
Why not just ask "what problem are you trying to solve?", or "What do you want it to do?"?.. Not only does this put the requirement back on the asker to describe what they want you to do, it removes your preconceptions from the request.

A mistake I often see myself making is that as soon as I get asked to do something I stop listening and start planning how I'm going to implement the solution. In many cases my preconceived solution will not solve the actual problem, because I've not actually found what the problem is that needs to be solved.

In many cases the requester doesn't really know what they are asking for and will need some prompting to actually think it through. This requires a discussion, rather than a simplistic request to define "use case".

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by denton-scratch on Friday December 23, 2022 @09:53AM (#34106447)
> Your precieved credibility goes way down when you stop speaking in jargon.

I don't agree - unless you're using jargon to conceal your intrinsic lack of credibility.

If you really understand a thing, then you can explain it in plain words. The use of jargon serves to conceal from both the listener and the speaker that the explanation is shallow. It's like a "code smell".

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sjducb on Friday December 23, 2022 @10:40AM (#34106959)
I wish that were true. The problem is that lots of things are hard to understand and there's a good chance you're listener won't get it.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by roflc0ptic on Friday December 23, 2022 @11:04AM (#34107253)
They're making a general statement about perception. This is markedly true and an important human dynamic. There's even a meme that plays on this: "How do you do, fellow kids?"

The linguistic patterns (including jargon but also more than that) peg us as part of various subcultures, as educated or not, rich or not, from Florida or not. I was interviewing with some random dude who went to Duke and he said "You remind me of my college roommate." I'd known this dude for 15 minutes: what else could there be, really, other than linguistic cues? Naturally, I was offered the job.

Jargon _can_ mean that the explanation is shallow; it just depends on which jargon employed when. Take any jargon filled non-sense - you can say equally shallow things entirely without the jargon!

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by majkinetor on Friday December 23, 2022 @10:09AM (#34106620)
Government is NOT a crowd, and if that was the case, it shouldn't be concerned about undefinable "in" status.

Just simple words and sentences, unambiguous. ELI5. Those guys know their stuff.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by anon223345 on Friday December 23, 2022 @10:10AM (#34106635)
Government folks typically do not know their stuff
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by jerf on Friday December 23, 2022 @10:28AM (#34106800)
You can always go for the high-risk, high-reward approach of demonstrating your stature by refusing to use the jargon by virtue of being too important to deal with it. Project confidence, do as you like, see how the dice roll.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sjducb on Friday December 23, 2022 @10:34AM (#34106884)
That works if you're super high status and you demonstrate status by breaking the rules. Think CEOs in turtlenecks and fundraising in your pajamas.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by oliwarner on Friday December 23, 2022 @10:33AM (#34106881)
It does link directly to the Plain English examples on "government jargon". These are mostly written in legalese.

It does not mean to avoid all jargon, it means you should say what you mean, not say things in a way to satisfy 300 year old rules on jurisprudence for the statute books.

http://www.plainenglish.co.uk/campaigning/examples/governmen...

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by lozenge on Friday December 23, 2022 @10:35AM (#34106902)
Luckily, gov.uk has credibility without resorting to jargon. Because it's got a special TLD and a crown icon on every page. And it's the government.
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by inopinatus on Friday December 23, 2022 @10:54AM (#34107131)
On the other hand, simplicity is a hallmark of brilliance.

"Feynman was a truly great teacher. He prided himself on being able to devise ways to explain even the most profound ideas to beginning students. Once, I said to him, 'Dick, explain to me, so that I can understand it, why spin one-half particles obey Fermi-Dirac statistics.' Sizing up his audience perfectly, Feynman said, 'I'll prepare a freshman lecture on it.' But he came back a few days later to say, 'I couldn't do it. I couldn't reduce it to the freshman level. That means we don't really understand it.'"

— Goodstein & Goodstein, Feynman's Lost Lecture: The Motion of Planets Around the Sun (Norton, New York, 1996)

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by 908B64B197 on Friday December 23, 2022 @12:48PM (#34108617)
Policing jargon is also a marker of being in the "in" crowd, at least, a different one.

See https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=34039816

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by sjducb on Friday December 23, 2022 @01:09PM (#34108844)
That post is a whole new level. We're using jargon to signal competence. They're using jargon to signal morality. If someone is incompetent then maybe don't promote them. If someone's immoral, what punishment should be dolled out against them?
Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by upofadown on Friday December 23, 2022 @12:52PM (#34108657)
>If you stop using jargon then people assume you don't know what you're talking about.

This works in reverse. If you use enough jargon then you can often convince people that you know what you are talking about, even if you don't... :)

You will rarely get called on it because people hate to admit when they don't understand something.

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by WalterBright on Friday December 23, 2022 @01:04PM (#34108799)
Caltech had its own special jargon, simply because it was fun:

flicking - do something fun

trolling - studying (opposite of flicking)

troll - someone who studies

infinite troll - someone who studies a lot

Boeing had the "tin benders" for structural engineers, and the "tube benders" for the hydraulics engineers.

In one company I worked at, the marketers were the "weasels" and the engineers were the "swine". A good piece of engineering was complimented as being "swinish".

Good times

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by jlg23 on Friday December 23, 2022 @02:07PM (#34109490)
> If you stop using jargon then people assume you don't know what you're talking about. This affect is real. Your precieved credibility goes way down when you stop speaking in jargon.

So let them learn it the hard way. If people prefer to trust someone they don't understand over making the effort to understand what they are being told in simple words, they only reveal their own ignorance.

I once was reprimanded in school (in absentia), for choosing my words to impress and not to be understood. That was probably the most important lesson I ever received.

But I think you are wrong about why jargon exists: Jargon lets us express complex ideas in a very compressed way, because, among peers, we understand exactly what is being said. It is just detrimental to effective communication with people outside our area of expertise. So yes, sometimes "NOP sledge" says it all, while with a different audience one might just skip that subject...

Re:Plain English: A simple guide on words to avoid in govern... by combatentropy on Friday December 23, 2022 @03:02PM (#34109993)
First of all, that's false. Time and again, experts who can explain complicated concepts with everyday words seem smarter, not dumber. To wit: Richard Feynman, Steven Pinker, C.S. Lewis.

Second, even if it were true, that would be all the more reason to stop it, because the reason is bad. It is selfish, at the expense of others. If you make things harder for people so that life is easier for you, then you are by definition evil.

"Short words are best, and old words are best of all." --- Winston Churchill