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Roast My Landing Page

I’m optimising the homepage lemon.io and need the help of the community.

We are targeting startups and the visual brand and tone of voice played a good role in our growth. I see there are a lot of things that make me doubt it.

Our conversion is a bit below of I would expect. I’m building a list of assumptions that will test within the next 3 months.

Looking for feedback on: • copy • design • trust

Thank you.

( 10 comments | 4 points | on HN )
Re:Roast My Landing Page by alexfromapex on Wednesday March 22, 2023 @08:45AM (#35260167)
It took me way to long to figure out what it was about. Needs better headline copy. Also, took the page like 3-4 seconds to load which isn't terrible but it's not optimized either.
Re:Roast My Landing Page by lemoneyeo on Wednesday March 22, 2023 @09:08AM (#35260420)
Thank you for feedback. Did you load it from the mobile or desktop?
Re:Roast My Landing Page by alexfromapex on Wednesday March 22, 2023 @12:57PM (#35263890)
Desktop
Re:Roast My Landing Page by andygor on Wednesday March 22, 2023 @08:51AM (#35260215)
So why did you decide to change it?
Re:Roast My Landing Page by lemoneyeo on Wednesday March 22, 2023 @09:07AM (#35260412)
Not change it. Optimize.
Re:Roast My Landing Page by surprisetalk on Wednesday March 22, 2023 @08:45AM (#35260163)
Wow, I love the branding!
Re:Roast My Landing Page by lemoneyeo on Wednesday March 22, 2023 @09:08AM (#35260424)
Thank you
Re:Roast My Landing Page by 1970-01-01 on Wednesday March 22, 2023 @09:49AM (#35260948)
way too much to scroll through.
Re:Roast My Landing Page by lemoneyeo on Wednesday March 22, 2023 @10:11AM (#35261260)
What would you cut?
Re:Roast My Landing Page by 1970-01-01 on Wednesday March 22, 2023 @10:26AM (#35261538)
All of it. Focus your main page on your best service and stuff the rest behind a hamburger button.