Re: Review our launching soon page please.
by gearoidoc on Tuesday July 02, 2013 @06:23AM
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Apart from the name (is it pronounced "Lurnk"?) I think its a good job. You explain what it is you do in the header and then request an email address - can't ask for more in a premarketing site.
Re: Review our launching soon page please.
by gearoidoc on Tuesday July 02, 2013 @07:33AM
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Ah I see.
Though I understand why you've spelt it that way (I'm guessing its for the .com domain name?), it might be a bit of an oversight to have a education company misspelling the word 'learn'...
Re: Review our launching soon page please.
by rameshnid on Tuesday July 02, 2013 @07:55AM
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Yep. Maybe thats the thing we will be known for :P Do u think LearnQ sounds better? Thats available but a bit pricey, can do it if we get some funding I guess.
> New, exciting way of doing online courses
Sounds like it's missing an article: "A new, exciting way of doing online courses"
And is "doing" the right word? Maybe the verb should be: "taking" or change the sentence structure from "of doing" to "to take"
There's a lot of little grammar and style things that should be polished...IMO it's a big factor in an online education's first impression
Good job dude.
Though I understand why you've spelt it that way (I'm guessing its for the .com domain name?), it might be a bit of an oversight to have a education company misspelling the word 'learn'...
Maybe pick up a .io for cheaper? Or change the name altogether?