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Re:Ask HN: Writing copy...please critique my homepage by 27182818284 on Tuesday December 18, 2012 @05:41PM (#4940040)
These proposed changes are significantly better than what is on the page right now. "All the cool kids are doing it.", for example, made me want to leave the page. It is very difficult to get that attitude right.
Re:Ask HN: Writing copy...please critique my homepage by samp615 on Tuesday December 18, 2012 @05:57PM (#4940114)
Thank you for this feedback. I agree and plan on taking this into account.