I think em-dashes were uncommon mainly because they're not always convenient to type.

I don't think there's any definitive way to check, but for me one of the biggest tells that a long piece of writing was LLM generated is that it will hardly say anything given how many words are in it.

(well that and the "it's not just x, it's y!" pattern they seem to love)

It's not just x it's y is also something people do!

That is possibly one of my personal writing weaknesses that lead my own writing to get flagged as AI.

I can admit "it's not just x, it's y" is mediocre writing - but it's also something mediocre writers do - it's how AI learned to do it!

But it's also often a shoehorned artificial contrast that doesn't really make sense. The Y is often not such a different thing from the X that would make it worthy an actual "not just X but Y" claim. Or the Y is a vague subjective term, or some kind of fancy-word-dropping. It's strong styling but little content, similar to politician CYA talk. I don't think it's necessarily a tech limitation, more of an effect of deliberate post-training to be middle-of-the-road nonoffensive and nonopinionated.

> I can admit "it's not just x, it's y" is mediocre writing.

Eh, there are times when it's entirely justifiable and even good.

The problem has more to do with making it a cliche. (Also, sometimes the X-Y pair is just uncanny in one way or another.)

It's not just patterns like "not just X, but Y", but also deeper patterns and a kind of narrative cadence. Sure it's also mimicking something real, but usually it's a mismatch between the insightfulness of the content and the quality of the delivery. It feels like chewing on empty calories, it's missing the intentionality and the edge of being human. I guess you need to read a lot of LLM output to get a feel for this beyond the surface level pattern matching.

> “It’s not just patterns… but also cadence…”

Nice try, ChatGPT.

Thank you!

Your exact post here claiming you can identify AI has all of the hallmarks of the AI detection algorithm you are proposing, in spades.

Hence my claim "actual people actually write like that"

It was a joke. But also my use of not x but y is not rhetorical but declarative. The whole point is that what many of us are talking about is not simply these surface patterns but how they are used and how the narrative rhythm of the sentences and paragraphs go.

I wonder whether AI house style is the result of the people training it having no sense of writing style or some kind of technical limitation.

With AI, there is no sense of the level of emphasis matching the meaning of the text, or a long-range dramatic arc - everything is a revelation, like somebody who can only speak in TED talks. Everything is extremely earnest, very important, and presented using the same five flashy language hacks.

> There are a ton of people like that, but the LLM house style also exists because a ton of people write that way too.

Everyone keeps saying this, and I keep asking for a link to this type of writing that is dated pre-2022, and I keep getting nothing.

If it was that common, I'd have gotten at least a few examples by now.

I believe that, much the same way as a fighter jet designed for the average pilot doesn't fit any of them, the 'average' of written text ends up reading like an LLM without being able to find a 100% matching sample.

I certainly used em dashes before 2022, and so did anyone who cares about proper typography.

> I certainly used em dashes before 2022, and so did anyone who cares about proper typography.

Who said anything about em-dashes? There's an entire Wikipedia page documenting the tells, and only one of the 15 or so items is "extended usage of em-dashes".

It's not fluff, it's actual tells.

No nonsense, no BS, just tells.

The key insight is...

I have seen people accuse someone of using AI solely because the comment contained em dashes.

> I have seen people accuse someone of using AI solely because the comment contained em dashes.

Yeah, but you haven't seen me do that :-)

(You also haven't seen anyone on HN recently (since this year) do that either).