Show HN: Introducing Spaceship

Re:Show HN: Introducing Spaceship by dwynings on Saturday February 11, 2012 @06:50PM (#3580535)

My suggestion is to try to distill what you do as much as possible. Nowhere in the post or on the landing page do you really state what Spaceship is.

Even saying something like, "Spaceship is a collaborative mind mapping application that supports rich media," would have helped me understand quicker.

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Re:Show HN: Introducing Spaceship by JakeOnRails on Saturday February 11, 2012 @07:51PM (#3580671)

I second this. I just skimmed the whole page and I have no idea what spaceship is besides a "tool for designers". After looking at the wall of text on your landing page I had no desire to even start the video. The image for the video is not super compelling either. Good luck!

Oh... and... what is it that spaceship does?

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Re:Show HN: Introducing Spaceship by Codhisattva on Saturday February 11, 2012 @07:51PM (#3580673)

Ditto.

The first paragraph needs to be specific. I read all the way to the tl;dr mark and still don't know what's brewing.

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Re:Show HN: Introducing Spaceship by mntmn on Saturday February 11, 2012 @07:03PM (#3580564)

Thanks, that was exactly the kind of constructive feedback I was hoping for when posting here.

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Re:Show HN: Introducing Spaceship by Codhisattva on Saturday February 11, 2012 @07:53PM (#3580676)

So ... could you post here, what it is in summary?

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Re:Show HN: Introducing Spaceship by mntmn on Saturday February 11, 2012 @08:21PM (#3580738)

Sure. Please see my separate comment in the main thread.

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