Re:Show HN: IndiePaper – An easy way to write and sell self-...
by aswinmohanme on Thursday October 07, 2021 @07:58AM
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Not at all, pushed all the recommendations. Thanks again for pointing out the mistakes, I think I hit a nerve with everyone who visited the homepage today :(
There are a couple of stylistic choices you might want to consider as well. You've got quite a few run on sentences. And most writers use "word processors" not "text editors" (assuming you're going for the average writer, not the HN crowd).
(Just trying to be helpful, please don't take this as criticism. Congrats on your launch!)