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Re:Launch HN: Atmana (YC S21) – An app to help cut down on c... by yourad_io on Tuesday July 27, 2021 @10:29AM (#27972868)
Suggestions for landing page copy:

- I would change the hero text "Helping Millennials Overcome Digital Addictions" to just "Overcome Digital Addictions"

- "millions" is not consistently capitalized.

- "Know more" -> "Learn more"

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Re:Launch HN: Atmana (YC S21) – An app to help cut down on c... by zero_billion on Tuesday July 27, 2021 @10:32AM (#27972895)
sure, thanks so much. will correct these rightaway!
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