Re:"To our surprise"
by newsbinator on Friday May 07, 2021 @10:36AM
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"at 17 minutes, the reagent was added" ... by god or universal happenstance.
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Or the PI, or a technician, or a grad student. The point is, it does not matter who did it.
Re:"To our surprise"
by mattkrause on Friday May 07, 2021 @03:32PM
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Exactly. The only "right" way to choose active vs. passive is to decide what you want to emphasize.
When describing an experimental method, it literally does not matter if a Nobel laureate, fresh-faced undergrad, robot, or zombie added the reagent. The point is that it was added, and so the passive voice works fine.
However, perhaps it is important that the reader understands how carefully patients were evaluated, rather than the fact that they were evaluated at all. Then, you might choose the active voice and write "A panel of 17 experts carefully evaluated each patient" instead of "patients were evaluated by 17 experts."