Re:Duality - A Social BitTorrent Client
by akkartik on Saturday May 14, 2011 @04:22PM
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I got more out of this comment than the original website. You should just say this in the first paragraph even before you refer to 'the paper'.
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Right, thanks for the feedback. I have updated it to better reflect the idea.
Yeah, that works great.
The 'Idea' page mentions this clearly. The third line in fact.
Between a reader and that 'third line' lie 5 lines, a click, and 8 more lines. Put the punchline first, it'll keep the reader reading longer.
It's a good idea; I just want more people to get it before they hit the back button.