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Re:Duality - A Social BitTorrent Client by akkartik on Saturday May 14, 2011 @04:22PM (#2548466)
I got more out of this comment than the original website. You should just say this in the first paragraph even before you refer to 'the paper'.
Re:Duality - A Social BitTorrent Client by sukhbir on Saturday May 14, 2011 @04:32PM (#2548483)
Right, thanks for the feedback. I have updated it to better reflect the idea.
Re:Duality - A Social BitTorrent Client by akkartik on Saturday May 14, 2011 @05:04PM (#2548539)
Yeah, that works great.
Re:Duality - A Social BitTorrent Client by sukhbir on Saturday May 14, 2011 @04:24PM (#2548471)
The 'Idea' page mentions this clearly. The third line in fact.
Re:Duality - A Social BitTorrent Client by akkartik on Saturday May 14, 2011 @04:27PM (#2548475)
Between a reader and that 'third line' lie 5 lines, a click, and 8 more lines. Put the punchline first, it'll keep the reader reading longer.

It's a good idea; I just want more people to get it before they hit the back button.