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Re:Anatomy of long sales letter by JeremyReeves on Wednesday March 02, 2011 @06:07AM (#2279167)
1 thing I noticed is that the longer version is REALLY cramped and a lot harder to read than the short version.

I'd suggest making a lot more white space in the longer version for easier reading.

The shorter version also has a headline, the longer kind of does but it's not noticeable.

Keep running tests - you'll find a winner! :)

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