If you can't reproduce the equivalent emotional load in English, it's probably because this particular phrase is not part of the culture. You can simulate it, much like Tolkien might, by choosing words that are more likely to resonate with an English speaker. For example, the word "walker" is not going to cut it, and "pedestrian" would be worse. Your explantation is helpful.
So you could try variations like "The traveler will beat the path." Or wait for the Russian module of WordLens :-).
Re:Having a launched product is hard
by MrRumblefish on Tuesday December 21, 2010 @09:26PM
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I personally prefer the more literal translation. I think it keeps the sense of a struggle and achievement as you described.
But is it good English? I'm not a native speaker, but it does sound somewhat unnatural.
Re:Having a launched product is hard
by MrRumblefish on Tuesday December 21, 2010 @11:00PM
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I agree that it does sound unnatural but I still would say it conveys the meaning better. The more correct version you wrote seems to loose the idea of struggle (to me at least).
It also occurred to me just now that original phrase presents the road from two different points of view: it is an obstacle, as its length separates you from your goal, but it is also the means to reach your goal. Does this make sense?
You suggestion does not deliver the same emotional load for me.
The phrase itself is a grossly inaccurate translation of a biblical verse into Russian, and using the original is not much help either.