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Re:Crossing the Sahara in the Fourteenth Century by pier25 on Thursday November 15, 2018 @09:45AM (#18459556)
I wouldn't say badly written, but it's sort of an older style of prose. With longer, more complex sentences, and a different use of punctuation.

If you read books from mid 20th century and before you find that sort of style which requires more focus than we are accustomed today on the internet.

Re:Crossing the Sahara in the Fourteenth Century by plouffy on Thursday November 15, 2018 @10:25AM (#18459936)
I'm not convinced.

> In the past, the severed heads of these Berber bandits covered the ground of the palace at Sijilmasa; there were highwaymen, then, who stopped you across the Sahara en route to the Land of the Blacks.

I don't know what's trying to be said here.

Re:Crossing the Sahara in the Fourteenth Century by oh_sigh on Thursday November 15, 2018 @02:05PM (#18462184)
Is english your native language? This seems like a pretty straightforward sentence.
Re:Crossing the Sahara in the Fourteenth Century by pier25 on Thursday November 15, 2018 @10:40AM (#18460074)
What's confusing you?
Re:Crossing the Sahara in the Fourteenth Century by kerbalspacepro on Thursday November 15, 2018 @10:57AM (#18460246)
It is a confusing sentence. Semicolons are stupid and shouldn't be used anymore. It has a random "then" thrown in there for no reason.
Re:Crossing the Sahara in the Fourteenth Century by jacquesm on Thursday November 15, 2018 @11:09AM (#18460370)
Try reading it out loud. Keep in mind that the original is in French and this is a translation of that French text so you are probably more at war with the translator than with the writer. Even so, to me - also a non-native English speaker - there wasn't a sentence in the article that I could not understand, sometimes it just takes a bit more effort.
Re:Crossing the Sahara in the Fourteenth Century by pier25 on Thursday November 15, 2018 @11:01AM (#18460285)
A bit poetic maybe, but it sounds fine to me. Maybe because English is not my first language.
Re:Crossing the Sahara in the Fourteenth Century by tralarpa on Thursday November 15, 2018 @11:10AM (#18460391)
I am not a native speaker and always eager to improve. I understood the "then" as "at that time (in the past)". Is that wrong?
Re:Crossing the Sahara in the Fourteenth Century by cco on Thursday November 15, 2018 @12:14PM (#18461114)
That is correct.
Re:Crossing the Sahara in the Fourteenth Century by CogitoCogito on Thursday November 15, 2018 @11:05AM (#18460329)
I find the sentence very confusing, but I don't think it has anything to do with semicolons. It just seems like unclear writing to me.