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Re:Shell scripts to improve your writing by raverbashing on Sunday January 01, 2017 @03:47PM (#13297252)
Looks like good guidelines overall, I just have one complaint

> Bad: We used various methods to isolate four samples. > Better: We isolated four samples.

The first sentence is right if a different method was used to obtain different samples. This is relevant information

Re:Shell scripts to improve your writing by faitswulff on Sunday January 01, 2017 @04:10PM (#13297370)
I would say it is relevant if you used different methods for each sample, but I understand why the author would omit "various" - it's too ambiguous.
Re:Shell scripts to improve your writing by bryanrasmussen on Sunday January 01, 2017 @04:04PM (#13297344)
I thought replacing 'quite difficult' with 'difficult' was unfair because I have always supposed quite to mean very or extremely when used in this manner.
Re:Shell scripts to improve your writing by hyperpape on Sunday January 01, 2017 @04:16PM (#13297400)
Later he cautions against adding 'very', so he's consistent at least.
Re:Shell scripts to improve your writing by bryanrasmussen on Sunday January 01, 2017 @05:32PM (#13297771)
what about slightly difficult. It's basically a language denuded of gradation.
Re:Shell scripts to improve your writing by hyperpape on Sunday January 01, 2017 @05:43PM (#13297827)
I think absolutism on this point is a bad idea. But I do think that many people, including myself, overuse qualifications in contexts where they don't add anything. In the example of a close match, what distinguishes a "very close match" from a "close match"? Better to omit the "very" unless you can quantify it, or otherwise make it clear what it adds.