It's quite discouraging to see criticism from someone who didn't read what they're attacking. The article plainly states that electrons in metals are hopping all the time, even when the current is zero. Go read it. That's the whole point of that section. A bit hard to miss, unless you leapt to a wrong conclusion after only reading the title.
> because electrons "fill in" the gaps
The article specifically describes this effect. It's probably not wise to criticize things you haven't bothered to read.
That section is a simplified introduction to the concept of "electron sea" and "drift velocity." It debunks the common grade-school textbook error that electrons in metal wires only start hopping between atoms if someone connects that wire in a battery circuit (where the electrons also are supposed to remain stuck to individual metal atoms when current is zero.) This is a serious textbook misconception because it teaches kids that the electron sea doesn't exist, and it prevents them from grasping the "full pipes" fluid analogy of electric circuits as well as later concepts of metallic bond, metal reflectivity, lack of brittleness, etc.
I'm not sure it's useful to argue whether an intuitive picture of electrons hopping or not is more correct. (Electrons are in any case not really little balls that are in one place.) These are all models of the world made with specific goals, where the most "correct" model would be solving the schrodinger equation for a macroscopic system -- something that would not give you any particular insight as to how things behave.
I think the usefulness of an intuitive layman's understanding should be derived from whether it makes you conclude the correct things about the macroscopic behavior of electricity.
What bugged me about this article was that without doing a quantitative analysis of a model and comparing it's predictions to experiments - physical interpretations like whether the electrons are hopping or not are so ambiguous that they are effectively meaningless.
Kids have a pretty good mechanical model of swing sets.
That point aside, while an intuitive understanding is nice, power factor is really a mathematical construct arising from the multiplication of two out-of-phase sinusoids (i.e. voltage and current).
I think to really understand active / reactive power and pf, you need to look at the maths. It's really not that difficult. And you certainly don't need to know vector calculus, merely high school trig.
Reading this reminds me of the importance of mathematics for placing a hard edge on vague and potentially confusing terms like "flow" "current" "energy" "store" etc. etc.
I wonder if it is possible to give 6th graders correct intuition about electricity without math?