Re:Last.Backend – Visual Docker Containers Orchestration
by lastbackend on Saturday April 18, 2015 @08:26AM
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WOW! That's amazing! We'll correct it in few minutes!! Thx a lot. Please contact us. I have some offer for you :)
Re:Last.Backend – Visual Docker Containers Orchestration
by rentnorove on Saturday April 18, 2015 @08:59AM
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Along the same lines, "How it works?" isn't quite right. Should probably be "How does it work?".
Re:Last.Backend – Visual Docker Containers Orchestration
by lastbackend on Saturday April 18, 2015 @09:04AM
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Agree! Done!
Re:Last.Backend – Visual Docker Containers Orchestration
by pgt on Saturday April 18, 2015 @10:54AM
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Haha, "I have some offer for you!" Awesome. Where are you guys based, @lastbackend?
Re:Last.Backend – Visual Docker Containers Orchestration
by lastbackend on Saturday April 18, 2015 @11:04AM
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Our team is distributed around the world :) We are everywhere and looking for talented developers and other talented guys.
Re:Last.Backend – Visual Docker Containers Orchestration
by loceng on Saturday April 18, 2015 @12:02PM
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Your designer(s) are prime.
Re:Last.Backend – Visual Docker Containers Orchestration
by loceng on Saturday April 18, 2015 @12:01PM
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Perhaps "You can link your server to Last.Backend with a special command - just copy it and execute it in a terminal." would work better; notice the "-" which will signify that it's a continued part of the thought.
Re:Last.Backend – Visual Docker Containers Orchestration
by lastbackend on Saturday April 18, 2015 @08:30AM
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Done!
Re:Last.Backend – Visual Docker Containers Orchestration
by sly010 on Saturday April 18, 2015 @09:37AM
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"Please make us create an useful tool for us - Developers."
could be
Please help us create a useful tool for developers.
Re:Last.Backend – Visual Docker Containers Orchestration
by lastbackend on Saturday April 18, 2015 @09:41AM
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Fixed! Thank you! :)
"Development and deployment never been so simple"
The grammar error here is a little jarring to native English speakers, and it's particularly noticeable because it's in the tagline. Fixing that would make a better first impression.
"Development and deployment have never been so simple" would work better, IMHO. Or perhaps you'd prefer "Development and deployment made simple", in keeping with the terse / minimalist theme.
While I'm at it, a few other minor corrections, in roughly decreasing importance the further down the page we go:
"GitHub and BitBucket integrations allows you automate DevOps." should be "GitHub and BitBucket integrations allow you to automate DevOps."
"Servers and Clouds linking" should probably be "Link Servers and Clouds" for verb consistency with previous headings; "Create... Build... Link... Manage... " is consistent, whereas "Create... Build... ..Linking... Manage..." is not.
"You can link your server to Last.Backend with special command. Just copy it and execute in a terminal." could be "You can link your server to Last.Backend with a special command. Just copy it and execute it in a terminal."
Finally, "Just look at scheme and you can see what's going on. Color element indication provide all information about all warning and problems. Logs output gives you ability to know much more." could be improved as "Just look at the scheme to see what's going on. Colored elements convey information about warnings and problems at a glance. Log output provides the ability to know much more." (or similar)
HTH! :)