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A comment on Kisha – The umbrella you'll never lose.
A bit of copy-editing:
'percepitation' in all the screenshots should be 'precipitation'. Or possibly just 'rain' / 'snow' / 'hail' ;)
'It doesn't bother you if leave one of your safe locations' -> 'It doesn't bother you if [you] leave [it in] one of your safe locations'
'It works in the buildings' -> 'It works in buildings'
I'll also second "too many uses of perfect". If it's perfect, why does it come with a warranty? ;)
A bit of copy-editing:
'percepitation' in all the screenshots should be 'precipitation'. Or possibly just 'rain' / 'snow' / 'hail' ;)
'It doesn't bother you if leave one of your safe locations' -> 'It doesn't bother you if [you] leave [it in] one of your safe locations'
'It works in the buildings' -> 'It works in buildings'
I'll also second "too many uses of perfect". If it's perfect, why does it come with a warranty? ;)