Thanks Peter. I'm going to add screenshots and a video. Gini is mainly for SaaS businesses to have all information about every customer in one unified place, so that they don't have to look in 5 different places, when doing customer support or metrics analysis.

Cool, then say that as your headline.

New text is better. This part "See a list of all your customers and a profile for each of them with all their information on one page." just says the same as the header, instead say what the benefit is: "Make it easier to give customer support etc. etc."

Plus needs a screenshot above the fold.

Your demo link is broken. Your learn more link doesn't really tell me much http://getgini.com/#features

Hey Peter, just updated the design and copy - http://gini.io