The visual design here looks much better, BUT that page doesn't even say what your service does! That should be put in a prominent tagline, like "Skyul is <this useful thing>"... whatever it actually is.

The most prominent item on the page is a search box... but I don't even know what I'm supposed to search for – apparently search terms? Why? Your page doesn't tell me anything I need to know.

And the main call to action – "Start an account today" – is smaller than the search button... and even below the fold on my screen.

Bottom line – read up on building effective landing pages! Start here for a quick summary: https://www.formstack.com/the-anatomy-of-a-perfect-landing-p...

You'll need to know this kind of thing to build a successful project in any niche.