Ask HN: Feedback on my first deck

Re:Ask HN: Feedback on my first deck by tmetzner on Tuesday February 11, 2014 @04:27PM (#7220572)

Two quick thoughts: 1. still fairly wordy on several slides (I know, it's REALLY hard to whittle down more) 2. you only hint at how you might make money: biz model should be very clear (you do a good job explaining how you'll spend $, but not make $)

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Re:Ask HN: Feedback on my first deck by adamzerner on Tuesday February 11, 2014 @05:53PM (#7221123)

Thanks for your thoughts! I'll work on improving those 2 things.

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