Ask HN: Feedback on my first deck

Posted by adamzerner on Tuesday February 11, 2014 @04:18PM
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https://www.dropbox.com/s/h418tltlwtartmy/deck.pdf

I've never made a deck before, and I'm not sure if this is what it's supposed to be like. I've read through lots of advice (ex. from Venture Hacks), but still feel unsure.

The main thing is that I feel like I'm making a bunch of claims, but not supporting them with arguments and evidence. However, if I try to provide arguments/evidence, it'll get too wordy, and all the advice I read says to keep it really short.

Am I not providing enough evidence? Other thoughts?

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Re:Ask HN: Feedback on my first deck by tmetzner on Tuesday February 11, 2014 @04:27PM (#7220572)

Two quick thoughts: 1. still fairly wordy on several slides (I know, it's REALLY hard to whittle down more) 2. you only hint at how you might make money: biz model should be very clear (you do a good job explaining how you'll spend $, but not make $)

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Re:Ask HN: Feedback on my first deck by adamzerner on Tuesday February 11, 2014 @05:53PM (#7221123)

Thanks for your thoughts! I'll work on improving those 2 things.

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