Re:Secret contract tied NSA and security industry pioneer
by vdaniuk on Friday December 20, 2013 @06:52PM
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How many times did you check your comment to make sure all grammar and punctuation is perfect? :)
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Re:Secret contract tied NSA and security industry pioneer
by elwell on Friday December 20, 2013 @07:08PM
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Is wasn't perfect. There was a space between "but" and the ellipsis. Not to mention the several other mistakes.
Re:Secret contract tied NSA and security industry pioneer
by waqf on Friday December 20, 2013 @08:30PM
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I disagree that the space between "but" and the ellipsis is a mistake, and the first citation I found (http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/ellipsis.htm) supports me.
However, lest anyone think I think I'm perfect, I'll point out that I omitted the period after "etc".
Re:Secret contract tied NSA and security industry pioneer
by guiambros on Friday December 20, 2013 @07:54PM
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It wasn't... You know, I hate being the guy that hate those who hate being that guy, but couldn't resist.
Re:Secret contract tied NSA and security industry pioneer
by kirubakaran on Saturday December 21, 2013 @02:52AM
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"You know, I hate being the guy that hate those who hate being that guy, but couldn't resist."
It is "I hate being the guy that hates those who hate being that guy" :-)
Re:Secret contract tied NSA and security industry pioneer
by guiambros on Saturday December 21, 2013 @07:59PM
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Mate! :)
Re:Secret contract tied NSA and security industry pioneer
by elwell on Friday December 20, 2013 @08:24PM
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ah, nice!
Re:Secret contract tied NSA and security industry pioneer
by qbrass on Saturday December 21, 2013 @02:54AM
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*hates those
Re:Secret contract tied NSA and security industry pioneer
by hisham_hm on Friday December 20, 2013 @10:21PM
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Which _several_ other mistakes?
Re:Secret contract tied NSA and security industry pioneer
by elwell on Friday December 20, 2013 @11:02PM
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note, -> note:
guy -> guy,
using 'but' twice in the sentence
etc -> etc. (noted by author)
in general, the phrasing of the second sentence is questionable. perhaps it should be two sentences with a period after "I'm lying"