Re:Secret contract tied NSA and security industry pioneer
by hisham_hm on Friday December 20, 2013 @10:21PM
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Which _several_ other mistakes?
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Re:Secret contract tied NSA and security industry pioneer
by elwell on Friday December 20, 2013 @11:02PM
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note, -> note:
guy -> guy,
using 'but' twice in the sentence
etc -> etc. (noted by author)
in general, the phrasing of the second sentence is questionable. perhaps it should be two sentences with a period after "I'm lying"