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Re:Show HN: Get discreet job interviews with your LinkedIn c... by wyclif on Wednesday September 04, 2013 @10:52AM (#6327934)
Yes, one immediate and non-technical way to improve this is to smooth out the copy. Another example:

Start having job interviews

I would suggest editing this to "start getting job interviews." The verb is more active and immediate, making the user feel they are receiving a benefit from your service instead of an incidental.

It may sound like a quibble, but to me the landing page copy is just as important, if not more important, than the design elements.

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Re:Show HN: Get discreet job interviews with your LinkedIn c... by victoriap on Wednesday September 04, 2013 @11:05AM (#6328034)
Great feedback, thanks. It will help us improve the home/landing page. It has been 2 almost weeks, and we are trying to validate the idea and come up with a better version.
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