Re:Show HN: A place to buy and sell services directly from e...
by lucahammer on Monday October 08, 2012 @03:57PM
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I am not sure I get what you want to say. We should do these three things or we are doing them?
Re:Show HN: A place to buy and sell services directly from e...
by cocoflunchy on Monday October 08, 2012 @05:17PM
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You should do these 3 things; I registered and I am still not 100% confident that I know what you do.
Welcome to work|i|o the one stop shop for...blah.
Or some form of one line and clear explanation of what the site is/does.
You're trying to get across 3 things very quickly here:
1. What the site is for. 2. How does it work (how can I use it?) 3. Why should I use it (what's the benefit for me?)
If there are alternatives, why should I use you instead of the alternatives? (e.g. too expensive, too clumsy, too rancid or whatever).