Re:The Day You Became a Better Writer (2007)
by jameshart on Tuesday July 08, 2025 @09:26PM
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I think the counterargument to this simplistic assertion is that "The boy was hit by a ball" seems equally legible to me to "A ball hit the boy". If you're quickly reporting the details of an accident to a doctor and it's crucial to get the information across quickly, I think many speakers would still start with "He was hit by a ball", not "A ball hit him." We're not interested in assigning agency to the ball here, we're interested in the effects on the boy. We're focusing down on the boy first, then talking about what is happening. Is he hitting a ball? Getting hit by a ball? Nobody cares what the ball's doing, it doesn't need to be prepped for surgery.
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Re:The Day You Became a Better Writer (2007)
by GGByron on Wednesday July 09, 2025 @01:10AM
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"I think many speakers would still start with "He was hit by a ball", not "A ball hit him." We're not interested in assigning agency to the ball here, we're interested in the effects on the boy."
And you don't favor the shorter message?
Re:The Day You Became a Better Writer (2007)
by jameshart on Wednesday July 09, 2025 @01:17PM
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I don’t think I would. But not willing to stage a real life experiment where I need to convey this information in an emergency to test my hypothesis.
Re:The Day You Became a Better Writer (2007)
by degamad on Wednesday July 09, 2025 @01:29AM
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I think you're onto something with "agency". In particular, "a car hit him" seems much less out-of-place than "a ball hit him", but we're more used to treating cars as first-class objects with agency, as compared to how we perceive balls.