Re:App.net is crowdfunding their realtime feed platform
by msutherl on Friday July 13, 2012 @09:27PM
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It took me 15 minutes to understand what "feed" means, which then lead me to understand what "social service" means. I think you intro paragraph could be clarified by replacing the word "service" with "platform". I know this isn't strictly true, but it's clearer to distinguish between platforms, which are for developers and services, which are for users. Try this:
"We're building a real-time platform that allows developers to create social services where users come first, not advertisers.
Our team has spent the last 9 years building social services, developer platforms, mobile applications and more.
We believe that advertising-supported platforms are so consistently and inextricably at odds with the interests of users and developers that something must be done.
"We're building a real-time platform that allows developers to create social services where users come first, not advertisers.
Our team has spent the last 9 years building social services, developer platforms, mobile applications and more.
We believe that advertising-supported platforms are so consistently and inextricably at odds with the interests of users and developers that something must be done.
Help us create the platform we all wish existed."