Re:Why I Bought an Encyclopedia
by hobobaggins on Friday June 14, 2024 @09:02PM
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Perhaps this is better for you:
A second definition in this convention limits the term motor vehicle to those vehicles which are used for carrying persons or goods, or for drawing on-the-road vehicles used for the carriage of [not or] persons or goods.
This vs the and motor vehicle needing quotes are debatable. The last sentence doesn’t need a comma but probably should be reworded for clarity.
Seems about as difficult to parse as typical highly technical writing.
Re:Why I Bought an Encyclopedia
by contingencies on Friday June 14, 2024 @11:57PM
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It's not technical, it's just bad.
Re:Why I Bought an Encyclopedia
by userbinator on Saturday June 15, 2024 @03:16AM
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It likely being a German translation, I'm not surprised.
The International Convention on Road Signs and Signals [1] defines a motor or power-driven vehicle as a self-propelled road vehicle. Rail-borne vehicles and country-specifically mopeds which are not treated as motorcycles are exceptions. A second definition in this convention limits the term motor vehicle to those vehicles which are used for carrying persons or goods or for drawing on the road vehicles used for the carriage or persons or goods.
"Country-specifically" -> "jurisdiction-specific definitions of mopeds".
"in this convention" -> "in the convention"
"the term motor vehicle" -> "the term 'motor vehicle'"
The final sentence makes no sense to me and is certainly missing a comma.