Re:Taking away iPhone made daughter a better person
by radiojosh on Thursday June 13, 2024 @04:53PM
(#40674650)
As soon as the author talked about the zebra stripe scars on the daughter's arm, I knew it wasn't about just the phone. As soon as the author said that their daughter went from Pink Floyd to stereotypical duck lips and peace signs, I decided they were completely full of it.
Re:Taking away iPhone made daughter a better person
by louwrentius on Thursday June 13, 2024 @06:33PM
(#40675609)
I agree 100%
Make sure she lets shine through that her child distrusts her so much that she lies and keeps secrets. The relationship between parent and child has broken down, and the child is not to blame.
Let the reader realize in not so subtle ways that the phone isn’t the actual issue, and let them realize the author is an unreliable narrator.