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Re:"A Young Lady's Illustrated Primer" Simulated by GPT-4 by geophile on Thursday October 19, 2023 @10:42AM (#37943585)
I'm fine if a story doesn't have a point, or if it leaves things unresolved. The problem with Stephenson (for me) is that the book is written as if it is leading to some shattering conclusion, and then it just doesn't. It fizzles right at the point that you are about to discover the long (because it's Stephenson) sought resolution.

I would have preferred the Diamond Age if it just was about that world, but without all the kerfuffle about the big secret. Nell wanders off into the sunset, or whatever.

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Re:"A Young Lady's Illustrated Primer" Simulated by GPT-4 by slothtrop on Thursday October 19, 2023 @10:56AM (#37943773)
Novels with a meandering world-building focus (e.g. LotR) are like a polar opposite and the most boring genre fiction in existence.

> as if it is leading to some shattering conclusion, and then it just doesn't

This sounds like another way of saying the story was fast-paced and engaging, and you didn't find the conclusion to feel like a "climax" with explosions. That's ok (notwithstanding that there was a big fight and all), but I think in "idea-driven" books like this it's just as well to leave things ending either strangely / unexpectedly, slightly unresolved or whatever. It's hard to put a bow on a story that can't really have a happy ending. Weird stories should have weird endings.

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