I actually did figure out what works and what doesn't in real artistic use. Which is the entire point of the article in OP - text doesn't work well beyond the basic use or amateur play, regardless of it being the initial prompt or editing; you need sketching and references (and actual skill) to do real work. I don't think anybody's using available methods of textual modifications for anything complex - they are cumbersome and unreliable, even worse than textual prompts. In fact, I haven't seen anyone using them at all.
Besides the implementation details, natural language just doesn't have enough semantic density and precision to give artistic directions, even for a human or AGI. Higher order guidance, style transfer, and compositing is how it's done.
You are about a year behind the state of the art.