Apple's writing style is unclear. It is poor for the intentional obscurity. Granted, it is a small issue in the context of the rest of the document. But the problem remains: The writing is intentionally obscure!

This hides the severity of the problems the patch fixes. The word "fix" is nowhere on that page. Presumably, Apple are releasing these poor-quality release notes in order to protect their public brand. Those corporate objectives are coming at a cost of writing quality and clarity.

Note, at this time, these CVEs are not public, so the savvy user can not search them up themselves.

I think patch notes are important, and reasonable effort should be made to make them clear. Instead, effort was made to obscure. Clarity should be the default!