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Re:Show HN: Science fiction inspired by an HN thread (5 min ... by user052919 on Monday November 14, 2022 @02:44PM (#33599817)
You know, someone else gave me similar feedback as well. I'm kind of reluctant to make it longer, but might be a better story if it is. Like: maybe have something about the government responses to it and what happens, etc, work some of the explanations in there. Going to keep this in mind, appreciate it!
Re:Show HN: Science fiction inspired by an HN thread (5 min ... by Nekhrimah on Monday November 14, 2022 @03:52PM (#33600843)
Just to be contrarian, I like the ending. Always be wary of over-explaining in stories, especially in science fiction.
Re:Show HN: Science fiction inspired by an HN thread (5 min ... by soperj on Tuesday November 15, 2022 @02:29PM (#33613783)
I find that you can trust the reader to deduce a lot of what you are explaining without having to explain it.