Re:Show HN: Cinecandy, a Movie Studio As A Service (MSAAS)
by fapi1974 on Wednesday November 23, 2011 @12:17PM
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Thanks! What sort of wording do you think is better than "creating group videos?"
Re:Show HN: Cinecandy, a Movie Studio As A Service (MSAAS)
by volandovengo on Wednesday November 23, 2011 @12:41PM
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Perhaps "Creating videos as a group."
I agree there is a tradeoff between too many words and too few. I'd suggest that you can improve it by just making the landing page longer, ie - put more information in the scrollable area.
Some feedback - it's a little hard to decipher what the service is all about upon landing upon the homepage. I would suggest making the page longer to explain how it works. groupme.com is a good example to look at.