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Re:Show HN: Cinecandy, a Movie Studio As A Service (MSAAS) by volandovengo on Wednesday November 23, 2011 @12:41PM (#3270838)
Perhaps "Creating videos as a group."

I agree there is a tradeoff between too many words and too few. I'd suggest that you can improve it by just making the landing page longer, ie - put more information in the scrollable area.

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