Do you have a template that you think I should use?
And do you know maybe somebody who could help me build a better landing page without costing me all my life savings?
As sibling comment says, use a website builder instead. Something like shopify will have everything you need (though I’m not massively familiar with it myself).
Another suggestion I have is to focus on the target audience. I skimmed the doc you linked to about uploading images (couldn’t find any extra docs on the site at a glance btw) and it felt geek heavy in terminology.
The shots of the device look nice, but there’s an app for managing it? Is it easy to use? If I buy this device would my wife ever use it or is it too complicated?
Are you actually making these devices yourself? If I were hand making these my starting point would be to sell to friends so I could iterate on the whole thing. There are a lot of people on here talking about ads and marketing but honestly, hustle is how you get started.
I don't define myself by my design skills so you didn't hurt any feelings :D
I am a bit wary of using Shopify for landing pages because I'm worried it will make it feel even more like a dropshipping enterprise...
But maybe that's the smaller problem if at least my website looks good then!
- Webflow: https://webflow.com/templates
- SquareSpace: https://www.squarespace.com/templates
- Shopify: https://themes.shopify.com/
I'd recommend Shopify, and a minimalist, light theme such as the one below, since your product is made of light wood.
https://themes.shopify.com/themes/craft/styles/default?surfa...
But I’ve been wary of using it for the whole website since I didn’t want my whole page structure and content coupled to shopify.
And I didn’t want it all to feel like a shopify store.
But maybe that was a bad priority and I should just get over it.
Thanks for the tip with the theme, btw
I was expecting some geocities crap. From what I see, the landing page is clear, concise and shows me the relevant info I'm looking for.
I was actually thinking about exactly this product earlier this week. I have kids and their schedule is really complicated these days - some days some of them need packed lunches, uniform is different on PE days etc etc. I want to walk into the kitchen and have the details for the day right there. There’s a real use for the product, you need to work on the landing page (I’d suggest considering starting again with a template)