Re:How we protect our most sensitive secrets from the most d...
by lifeisstillgood on Thursday November 18, 2021 @12:58PM
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Off topic, but I love the suggestion in "tone of voice" on how to test if a sentence is written in passive or active voice. Just add ... by monkeys to the end of the sentence. If sentence still makes sense, its passive, so rewrite it
e.g.
A decision has been made to close your account …by monkeys
e.g.
A decision has been made to close your account …by monkeys
vs
We decided to close your account ... by monkeys