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Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by dredmorbius on Thursday June 10, 2021 @04:10PM (#27465167)
Desplite the original title (HN's clarified it), the topic isn't technical writing as might be presumed, but writing on technology, and mostly the sort of pie-eyed, overly credulous and bombastically optimistic variety that's often found. Even, occasionally, on the pages on Hacker News.

The list is a set of tired tropes which occur with some frequency.

It's short. There are links to expanded discussion. The context is a 10-year blog of the author's on the larger topic of technology and technological criticism, and yes, there's a book, pay-what-you-can, CC-licensed: https://gumroad.com/l/CWRfq

I might have added, substituted, or amended a few items, most especially that there is actually something of a history and philosophy of technological criticism, but that's me. The latter point is picked up in the blog at large and the book.

For an item I very nearly passed over on account of its original title, this is actually an intruiging find. Thanks to thomasbjeven for turning it up, and L.M. Sacasas for writing it.

Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by dredmorbius on Thursday June 10, 2021 @08:01PM (#27467674)
CC-BY-ND-NC licence, specifically.
Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by geocrasher on Thursday June 10, 2021 @08:56AM (#27460131)
11. Don't refer to anything as simple just because it is simple to you.
Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by farleykr on Thursday June 10, 2021 @09:38AM (#27460602)
The article could do with more substance overall but this is one of my biggest pet peeves and I appreciate it being pointed out. I think the tendency of some tech articles/tutorials to refer to things as simple is part of the faux-friendly-jokey attitude that a lot of tech writing adopts—especially on sites like Medium. That and emojis and gifs. I tend to close an article/tutorial as soon as I see an emoji or a gif.
Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by dont__panic on Thursday June 10, 2021 @11:09AM (#27461619)
At the very least, gifs should only play when you click them in an article that I'm actually expected to read. Do other people actually enjoy reading static text with a giant low-resolution flickering image on screen next to it? It's just so distracting to me. Seems like Developer Advocates love to do that sort of thing in blog posts.
Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by dredmorbius on Thursday June 10, 2021 @04:04PM (#27465097)
If you're looking for substance, the article itself is from a related blog on technology, and there's a book compiling ~100 highlight articles from that. The short list is just that: a short list.
Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by combatentropy on Thursday June 10, 2021 @10:33AM (#27461234)
A post three days ago highlighted comments here that had the phrase "why not simply": https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=27415725
Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by drewcoo on Thursday June 10, 2021 @09:25AM (#27460451)
> in no particular order …

And what follows is an ordered list. Of mostly unsubstantiated nonsense explained in bloated language. That opposite of what I'd expect from good tech writing.

Is this a satire? It feels like something out of McSweeney's.

Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by cedricd on Thursday June 10, 2021 @09:57AM (#27460819)
Thanks. I was thinking the same thing. The language is hard to read.

http://paulgraham.com/simply.html

Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by combatentropy on Thursday June 10, 2021 @11:04AM (#27461568)
> And what follows is an ordered list.

Isn't it just a numbered list? You can number things, but that doesn't mean it's in order of importance, just the order it popped into the writer's head.

> Of mostly unsubstantiated nonsense explained in bloated language. That opposite of what I'd expect from good tech writing.

I agree. At first I thought this was for "tech writing" in the sense of user manuals. But this is for journalists. And it's more just a vague rant.

Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by projektfu on Thursday June 10, 2021 @12:33PM (#27462589)
Most unordered lists like this should be numbered so you can later refer to the points by number.
Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by watwut on Thursday June 10, 2021 @11:54AM (#27462145)
Every list is ordered. "No particular order" means "dont think they are ordered by importance".

It is list of authors pet peeves, stuff he would like writers to follow. I did not found the language bloated, it was easy to understand.

Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by munificent on Thursday June 10, 2021 @12:57PM (#27462864)
The headline is confusing, but I think the author means advice for "people who write about technnology", not "technical writers" the profession. The second sentence is pretty clear on the intended audience.
Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by rcpt on Thursday June 10, 2021 @01:06PM (#27462969)
"The craft of scientific writing" is a great book btw.
Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by johncla99 on Thursday June 10, 2021 @10:10AM (#27460981)
Wait...I was a tech writer for 20+ years at a major software developer. To me, a tech writer is someone who documents apps or APIs. If true, I don't see what this article has to do with tech writers.
Re:Unsolicited Advice for Technology Writers (2014) by combatentropy on Thursday June 10, 2021 @11:06AM (#27461591)
It isn't for that kind of tech writer. It is "for pundits, journalists, bloggers, and assorted scribblers who write about technology".