News for hackers. Stuff that matters.
Re:A paradigm shift to combat indoor respiratory infection by TeMPOraL on Friday May 14, 2021 @10:13AM (#27154547)
Yeah, it's called "inverted pyramid", and it's supposed to be the gold standard of journalistic writing. IIRC it's being taught as part of vocational education.

And yet, news media are the last place you're likely to find articles written in this style. Somehow, they manage to deliver the exact opposite of what they should be. A fractal of confusion, recursively unfolding noise.

(It's as if they were making a lot of money on maximizing the time a reader is engaged with any given article. It's as if - and I know this sounds crazy - the articles were there just to hold the user down, while they're being exposed to something else...)

Re:A paradigm shift to combat indoor respiratory infection by Angostura on Friday May 14, 2021 @01:33PM (#27157127)
Its 'pyramid structure', not inverted. It was used in newspapers for two reasons.

The first is because, yes it allows busy readers to access the most salient facts first. But secondly, and perhaps more importantly from the point of print newspaper production, it allowed subs to always cut from the bottom, without having to read the whole piece carefully...

Newspapers would go through several editions throughout the night as new stories came in or existing stories were expanded. What started life as a front page lead might find itself moved to page three and progressively shortened, possibly down to a 1 sentence news-in-brief NIB.

The pyramid style let subs always fit a story into the available space, simply by cutting everything progressively from the bottom.

This story in Wired is not a news story and is not written as a news story. It is a feature story and its construction follows different rules.

It's a very good feature story, in my opinion.

Re:A paradigm shift to combat indoor respiratory infection by saurik on Friday May 14, 2021 @12:15PM (#27155907)
Wired is a magazine, not a newspaper: it doesn't exist to quickly present information every day, but to provide entertaining writing once a month; insisting it use an inverted pyramid is as strange as arguing that if only movies and books just led with the resolution, it would save you a lot of time.
Re:A paradigm shift to combat indoor respiratory infection by dredmorbius on Friday May 21, 2021 @12:49PM (#27236513)
Any publication still competes for attention.

Practices which show contempt for the reader's time and interest are ultimately counterproductive.

Re:A paradigm shift to combat indoor respiratory infection by rcoveson on Friday May 14, 2021 @12:01PM (#27155718)
> Yeah, it's called "inverted pyramid"...

Narrow (succinct) at the top and broad (detailed) at the bottom seems like a normal pyramid to me.

An "inverted pyramid" would be like one of those poems that describes fine details first and only in the last sentence reveals what it's been describing.

I don't doubt that it's actually called that, but it seems backwards to me.

Re:A paradigm shift to combat indoor respiratory infection by thatcat on Saturday May 15, 2021 @04:28PM (#27168688)
Re:A paradigm shift to combat indoor respiratory infection by TeMPOraL on Monday May 17, 2021 @04:48AM (#27181331)
Thank you. The other replies made me worried my memory is failing me.
Re:A paradigm shift to combat indoor respiratory infection by Angostura on Friday May 14, 2021 @01:33PM (#27157132)
Yeh, it's simply called pyramid structure.