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Re:Ask HN: Feedback on our landing page? by caleb on Monday June 20, 2011 @07:56AM (#2673766)
Couple of ideas:

Change "loose" to "lose" (typo).

Instead of saying "Gush puts..." consider wording such as "Share your photos and access your work online."

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