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Re:Ask HN: Feedback on our landing page? by maxdemarzi on Monday June 13, 2011 @04:51PM (#2650637)
Copywriting is hard.

Instead of :

"Your photos are your memories; you should never lose them. We store every photo you have ever taken. And we do it free."

How about:

"Your photos are your memories, don't lose them. Let us safeguard every photo you have ever taken completely free."

"Your photos are your memories, don't lose them. Let us safeguard your photos completely free."

"Your photos are your memories, don't lose them. Let us safeguard your memories completely free."

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