Re:I tried out-training my diet for 18 months
by ijustateacookie on Wednesday November 25, 2020 @08:26AM
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Thanks for the feedback, I'm always playing around with different styles to see what people enjoy more or less. Replies like this go a huge way in helping me fine-tune. Thanks for reading--and good luck with the pizza battles.
If you want an unsolicited bit of internet feedback I'd suggest your writing would be even better without the puns - it's engaging enough without them - but that's purely a personal opinion.