Launched My First Startup

Re:Launched My First Startup by lukevp on Sunday October 18, 2020 @11:46AM (#24818678)

Good luck! As others said, few typos and I’d suggest having someone else review the copy on the site. For example, this is the first thing I read, and it does not feel like natural English.

> Update the blogs and content on the website right away and notice the output.

Why not something like “Bid on and acquire expert-curated content for your blog or website in 5 minutes or less”

Also, this should have a Show HN tag since you self posted it.

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Re:Launched My First Startup by burlesona on Sunday October 18, 2020 @11:55AM (#24818760)

Came here to post the same. I think this site will struggle in selling written content when it does not feel like it was written in “native” English. Unless this is aimed at a different primary geography (not UK/US/CA/AU/NZ), in which case maybe that needs to be front and center?

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Re:Launched My First Startup by kajeet on Sunday October 18, 2020 @11:55AM (#24818763)

Thanks for such a great advice.

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Re:Launched My First Startup by 3Scribe on Sunday October 18, 2020 @08:48PM (#24822420)

> Thanks for such a great advice.

Yup, that's what he's talking about. The market I assume you're going for is native English speaking so you should really get native English speakers to look over your website.

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