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Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by acqq on Friday August 28, 2020 @02:22AM (#24301895)
What is jarring to me are always the anachronisms. E.g. while I can imagine that some form of short "bro" could have existed earlier, when I read the line using "sushi" I can't help but remembering that "sushi" didn't exist until recently. Then I feel cheated, knowing that the original form said something with the different meaning, and I'm aware that I can't know what it is reading the "modern" "retelling".

Another anachronism I remember: in another otherwise easy to read translation of an antique text (as is, originally written around 2000 years ago) the translator decided to regularly use the word "sadistic" which is constructed from the name of a real person living less than 300 years ago:

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Marquis_de_Sade

Otherwise, modernizing meter (moving to another, more suitable to the the language of the new version, or even doing away with it if the goal is just to retell the story in a more approachable way, with the acceptance that it would simply be too clumsy in the target language) I consider very acceptable.

Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by ecdavis on Friday August 28, 2020 @03:48AM (#24302376)
A strange aspect of our written culture is the extent to which documents are imbued with a sense of permanence from which they cannot easily escape. Beowulf was told and retold for at least decades - more likely centuries - before someone decided to write it down. Now, retellings[0] of the story are called translations, judged by many for their accuracy and historicity.

Sashimi's been around for a long time. "Gravlax" would've been less alliterative.

[0] It's telling that you put that word in quotes. Stories are things to be told, aren't they?

Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by 082349872349872 on Friday August 28, 2020 @04:23AM (#24302564)
As the cousin thread points out, possible translations are a bit like Helen vs #nofilter Penelope: they may be either very beautiful or very faithful, but unless one has been blessed by the gods, that or is exclusive.

Hipsters who prefer early Beoƿulf will enjoy http://www.bl.uk/manuscripts/Viewer.aspx?ref=cotton_ms_vitel...

Related: https://news.ycombinator.com/item?id=24293894

https://ang.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bēowulf

Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by goto11 on Friday August 28, 2020 @04:42AM (#24302684)
Translations of ancient texts are anachronisms per definition. The English language did not exist at the time.
Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by acqq on Friday August 28, 2020 @06:47AM (#24303399)
Ever watched some film about ancient Rome from around middle of 20th century? I am of course aware that the Romans didn't use shampoos and hairspray 2000 years ago, but that's the level of "incorrectness" that I'm used to accept in order to watch any such movie. Still, imagine that the protagonists in the same movie have Seiko watches -- that would be to me much more distracting.

I'm of course aware that in both cases for somebody from that time much more would seem "wrong."

Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by goto11 on Friday August 28, 2020 @08:09AM (#24303892)
Yeah, it is funny which kinds of anachronisms we accept and which we don't. In movies it is common to have people in authentic-looking historical costumes using modern language and having modern values and thinking. In theater it is often the other way around - historical texts acted in modern or anachronistic costumes.
Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by smhost on Friday August 28, 2020 @05:15AM (#24302897)
> Then I feel cheated, knowing that the original form said something with the different meaning

ironically, "meaning" as a thing that belongs to a technical dissection of single words/phrases is a fairly modern notion.

Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by acqq on Friday August 28, 2020 @05:33AM (#24303008)
> is a fairly modern notion

I believe it is ancient, the way I remember the texts, the false etymologies of words and names are present even in the Bible. People always loved the stories about how why something is named something, even when the story is false, if it's good, it will be repeated. We are all storytellers.

Exactly because I know "the story of sashimi" that word is for me jarring in Beowulf. It's not only anachronistic for the setting where the story takes place, it is also from the wrong part of the world, implying today's global trade of culinary fashion to that time and place:

   "skinny-dipping in a sleeping sea
   and made sashimi of some sea monsters."
Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by smhost on Friday August 28, 2020 @06:50AM (#24303413)
That's exactly what I mean. Pre-modern etymology was different than it is now. For example, the ancient greeks weren't interested in tracing a word back to some geographic-historical commodity. They were interested in tracing a word back to the source of its own meaning (which they often traced back to the gods), whereas for you, the meaning of a word is just the geographic-historical roots of its signified or whatever.
Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by goto11 on Friday August 28, 2020 @05:47AM (#24303084)
Do you also consider "monsters" anachronistic?
Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by acqq on Friday August 28, 2020 @06:16AM (#24303247)
> Do you also consider "monsters" anachronistic?

No, but I'll enjoy reading your argument why you are asking that.

Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by goto11 on Friday August 28, 2020 @07:55AM (#24303792)
Monster is from Latin and only entered English after the Norman conquest. Anachronistic and from the wrong part of the world!
Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by acqq on Saturday August 29, 2020 @05:31PM (#24319573)
> from the wrong part of the world

Can that be argued? It's not that the "contact" and influence didn't exist, it's just that these specific people wouldn't use that language at that moment of time. The Romans were already on English ground long before Beowulf was written so using Latin words there is still much more acceptable to me -- it doesn't imply some access or historical impossibility that didn't exist.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Julius_Caesar%27s_invasions_of...

The same can't be said about sashimi. Again, like in the example of the movies (in other messages), I'm simply not expecting absolute purity, I just find Seiko watches too distracting there.

Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by goto11 on Monday August 31, 2020 @05:45AM (#24329811)
It is not a Latin word, it is a word from Old French which is a Romance language evolved from Vulgar Latin. A lot of words from Old French entered English after the Norman conquest. This is the major difference between Old English (the language of Beowulf) and Middle English.

You may not care about any of that, but my point is a translation into modern English is by definition anachronistic. Avoiding 20th century loanwords like sashimi will not make it authentic, at best it will make the text feel slightly old fashioned, but it would still be wholly anachronistic.

Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by acqq on Wednesday September 09, 2020 @04:39PM (#24425671)
For the reference, the Latin word is monstrum, and like I've said, there were surely people using that word while living on the territory of today's England long before Beowulf was written.

I'm quite sure no Japanese were living there either before or at the time Beowulf was written. That's the difference that I consider jarring, not the fact that the newer language is the language of the translation. Even in English, not all words have the same "weight" -- some simply "sound" new and have certain "modern" connotations and some don't. Some imply origin from one place, some from another, etc. It's simply more complex than "the whole English is newer, who cares" approach.

My favorite example from 1490 is:

"In this book, Caxton tells the story of some merchants from the North of England trying to buy eggs from a woman in the South of England. The northerner uses the word egges, derived from Old Norse, but the Southern woman, who uses the word eyren from the Old English, does not understand. A humorous misunderstanding ensues."

https://www.bl.uk/learning/timeline/item126611.html

Re:Not the 'Beowulf' You Think You Know by autisticcurio on Friday August 28, 2020 @02:56AM (#24302085)
Dats sick bro!