unless you're going to have an actual human do it, I think it might be better to just not try. I get tons of messages on linkedin from recruiters who say something like "wow impressive profile! based on your experience at {current role}, we think you'd be a great fit for company XYZ". except company XYZ is always some web service company in a totally different domain. my current job is working on a niche desktop c++ product. if I'm a "great fit", so is anyone else with a pulse and a cs degree.
if I get a generic message saying "hey I'm recruiting for company XYZ, here's what we do", I might respond if it sounds interesting. I'm definitely not going to respond if you make it obvious that a bot scraped my profile and didn't understand anything about it.
On that topic, it also doesn't change my mind if you have a bot send a template email or you have a human blindly fill in and send a template email.
Hi, ${user_name}! How do you like our product?
We are working hard on ${first_clicked_link}.
BTW, ${user_browser} rules!
That last part is just creepy.
"Your location (${location}) is near mountain X, we should go hiking one day."
Perfect!
Re:To Get More Replies, Say Less (2017)
by mepiethree on Friday July 24, 2020 @10:40AM
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If they're using a company email, maybe read their company website for 1 minute?
"Netlify has proven exceptionally useful for innovative energy companies like yourself and {other energy industry client}"
How do you write a personalized email for a new user?