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Re:Ask HN: How can I improve my writing by Kaibeezy on Sunday May 10, 2020 @08:56AM (#23132249)
Didn’t look at your link, but the above is fine. Concise, organized. It’s OK.

Advice: Practice. Edit.

Suggestion: Take an intro to journalism class. Got to be a million of those online right now. Write, write, write. Edit, edit, edit, edit, edit.

Re:Ask HN: How can I improve my writing by robotichead on Sunday May 10, 2020 @09:02AM (#23132280)
Thank you :) I did spend a while editing and completely re-writing sections