That's called a http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Garden_path_sentence
no, i don't think it's a garden path sentence, because prior to the comma, it's just gibberish. a garden path sentence leads you down one path of meaning before turning the tables on you. it's quite possible that i'm being pedantic or just wrong, but i think the op's point stands: it's badly written copy and needs to be changed. it can't be justified as a poetic device.
Re:FitFu (YC W11): Stay active anywhere
by JoeCortopassi on Friday December 17, 2010 @04:46PM
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Apostrophes around 'you' and 'fu' would do alot for clarity
Re:FitFu (YC W11): Stay active anywhere
by chrischen on Friday December 17, 2010 @04:52PM
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Or bolding "you" and "fu."
Dashes are the cleanest and most portable solution to this problem.
Activate some you-time, fit in some fu-time.
> Activate some you time, fit in some fu time
By the time I got to the comma, my brain was totally halted.