Re:Help Send Us To Startup Camp + Foo Camp
by jasonlbaptiste on Tuesday May 27, 2008 @10:39PM
(#201708)
Hey Peter,
Thanks! Read more on your bio, and the same respect goes both ways. We're nowheres near perfect, and what the criticism rather than a simple "oh that's great, definitely send me an invite" response you usually get.
- This pitch was meant to be longer, but my goal is to really make the problem the first priority. Quicker is definitely better. The one liner needs to be improved significantly.
-Normally we'd sub in the screenshots for an actual demo of the product if it were a live pitch. We're thinking of cutting down on the pictures in the problem part showing the investor, entrepreneurs, support agent,etc. in order to get to the product a lot faster.
-See my response below to TitleWave. I hate the organize + share information line we use, and want to find something that really evokes exactly what we do. There's a few ideas bouncing around. No lies, this part keeps me up at night.
-I sense the same problems, and that's why we make our pitches available publicly. This lets us get the feedback we need. We know we suck in certain areas, and want to get rid of that.
-Glad I came across enthusiastic. I'm passionate about the product we're building, and think it's going to change the way entrepreneurs work. We're product driven for sure. Would love to send you an invite when we're ready.
Thanks! Read more on your bio, and the same respect goes both ways. We're nowheres near perfect, and what the criticism rather than a simple "oh that's great, definitely send me an invite" response you usually get.
- This pitch was meant to be longer, but my goal is to really make the problem the first priority. Quicker is definitely better. The one liner needs to be improved significantly.
-Normally we'd sub in the screenshots for an actual demo of the product if it were a live pitch. We're thinking of cutting down on the pictures in the problem part showing the investor, entrepreneurs, support agent,etc. in order to get to the product a lot faster.
-See my response below to TitleWave. I hate the organize + share information line we use, and want to find something that really evokes exactly what we do. There's a few ideas bouncing around. No lies, this part keeps me up at night.
-I sense the same problems, and that's why we make our pitches available publicly. This lets us get the feedback we need. We know we suck in certain areas, and want to get rid of that.
-Glad I came across enthusiastic. I'm passionate about the product we're building, and think it's going to change the way entrepreneurs work. We're product driven for sure. Would love to send you an invite when we're ready.
Thanks!
-jlb