Re:Ask HN: Please Review My Landing Page
by milanmot on Saturday October 20, 2018 @10:37AM
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Ok here's the feedback:
1: Really huge font of the punchline. I will make it little smaller as my focus is not going to the scrolling text below it.
2: Message is somewhat clear. I am confused whether it is a sales product or a CRM product.
3: It says that convert subscribers into revenue. But doesn't mention "How" anywhere. You need a section of "How it works" somewhere.
4: Can I see a demo implementation somewhere?
1: Really huge font of the punchline. I will make it little smaller as my focus is not going to the scrolling text below it. 2: Message is somewhat clear. I am confused whether it is a sales product or a CRM product. 3: It says that convert subscribers into revenue. But doesn't mention "How" anywhere. You need a section of "How it works" somewhere. 4: Can I see a demo implementation somewhere?