Neither of those words are adding what you think they are adding to that sentence
I’m pretty sure that I can distinguish neutral from emotional.
> See, you just ditch "enjoy" and "fair" parts and it goes neutral.
That the trial is fair is important, and should not be ditched or glossed over.
Re:Anatomy of a Killing
by NeedMoreTea on Tuesday September 25, 2018 @11:55PM
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But the Cameroonian government statement includes those words. Ditch them and it becomes inaccurate, or at least incomplete, reporting.
It did, but in a different tone. I understand the quoted letter as a sarcastic “they ‘enjoy’ it but that will not last long”. And then reporter takes these words and puts them in a sense of “a government makes clear that they will enjoy poi and fair trial” literally, as if government liked that and “fair” meant “good for them”. That seems like standard low-grade journalism, and like it was done here. Not that we shall not forgive that, but still.
See, you just ditch "enjoy" and "fair" parts and it goes neutral. You don't have to be neutral, but news do.